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Broken Teenage Glory

This probably isn't very good but, I'm new, so........ And the verses are the same both times before and after the chorus. Criticism is encouraged and wanted, so please give me pointers if you feel like it. (Just please don't be unpleasant) thanks! We build bridges just to break them down Fix our hearts, just to tear them out. It's so unhealthy But we don't care at all We know we're rejects It makes us proud We spin so fast, and then we hit the ground It doesn't matter, cause we just laugh it off And come tomorrow Well do it all again You call us crazy But it never gets under our skin We're invincible In our broken teenage glory We ripped out all the pages And wrote a mess of a story So we don't care About the whispers and the stares We're living life the way it ought to be While we still are young and free

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Date: 4/19/2016 11:54:00 PM
Brendon Reddings, well done. skat
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