Broken Teenage Glory
This probably isn't very good but, I'm new, so........
And the verses are the same both times before and after the chorus. Criticism is encouraged and wanted, so please give me pointers if you feel like it. (Just please don't be unpleasant) thanks!
We build bridges just to break them down
Fix our hearts, just to tear them out.
It's so unhealthy
But we don't care at all
We know we're rejects
It makes us proud
We spin so fast, and then we hit the ground
It doesn't matter, cause we just laugh it off
And come tomorrow
Well do it all again
You call us crazy
But it never gets under our skin
We're invincible
In our broken teenage glory
We ripped out all the pages
And wrote a mess of a story
So we don't care
About the whispers and the stares
We're living life the way it ought to be
While we still are young and free
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