Broken society

Broken Society 

I identify as a spiritual entity an unknown identity blending into the background of a backwards society. 

I am a universal being lurking in the shadows I am often heard yet never seen. 

You will never see inside of me 

The noose is tightening around my neck I am struggling to breathe. 

When was this world taken over by a bunch of 

corrupt, cowards, criminals, traitors, liars and thieves

We all live inside a fabricated existence weaved  inside a web full of lies 

How can 1 truely live. 

If 1 believes he can never die 

The stars across my sky’s have being  etched into my eyes 


I have lived 1000 lives 

I have died 1000 times. 

 I am a universal soldier 

I am the enforcer. 

Society is nothing more than a heard of sheep being led to slaughter. 

 The monsters of the deep hidden in the depths of the  holly waters.

I have an no tolerance for 

Ignorance, Arrogance negligence, violence or  incompetence. 

Vampires drinking the blood of the innocent  out of the holly grail 

We are a freight about to derail 

We are all products of a system that was built to fail. 

Written by 
Adrian Bogdal 28/9/2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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September 27, 2025 at 9:56 PM
Very powerful Spoken Word offering, Adrian. A clear hot expression of Anger. Welcome to this Soup. I hope to see more of this kind of raw poetry that will shake some poets from slumber into Awakening. Anger is not to be swept under the carpet. The Spoken Word must bring it to the fore to dissipate. History calls for it. As an old Soul, you too are called to write. Have a lovely day.
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