Broken Sanity

Broken Sanity
                                                 I'm broken
                                                 I'm soaking
                                       Emotion breakdown, beware
                                         Theres not much, upstares
                                           Need damage repaired
                                     Before brain damage declared
                                     Mind clear of sticks and stones
                                     That may break me into moans
                                          Before the pain of alone
                                                   Harms me
                                           The feeling alarms me
                                          Can you feel my scream
                                            Can you hear my pain
                                            See the evidence here
                                               In my dieing brain
                                               Am I thriving sane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Moore Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 12:11 AM
This poem hit me...I can relate in many ways...thanks for sharing...
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November 18, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Wow this is good. Welcome to the soup
Chappell Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 6:07 PM
wow i love this piece here i feel all of this sometimes my friend so so stong in image and words thank you
Shango Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 4:38 PM
I felt I was reading Louis McNeice prayer before birth. Good.
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November 18, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ..hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. any help needed just ask any one.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv...
Tacito Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 1:59 PM
Straight incredible & intense. Wow.
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November 18, 2010 at 12:42 PM
deep write,, enjoyed,..p.d.
Adeite Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 11:31 AM
keep hope alive n keep your pen dancing. great you Jenifer. this is also to say welcome to the Soup, hope to read more of you! love, Adeleke
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