Broken Sanity

Broken Sanity
                                                 I'm broken
                                                 I'm soaking
                                       Emotion breakdown, beware
                                         Theres not much, upstares
                                           Need damage repaired
                                     Before brain damage declared
                                     Mind clear of sticks and stones
                                     That may break me into moans
                                          Before the pain of alone
                                                   Harms me
                                           The feeling alarms me
                                          Can you feel my scream
                                            Can you hear my pain
                                            See the evidence here
                                               In my dieing brain
                                               Am I thriving sane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/27/2011 12:11:00 AM
This poem hit me...I can relate in many ways...thanks for sharing...
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:08:00 PM
Wow this is good. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 11/18/2010 6:07:00 PM
wow i love this piece here i feel all of this sometimes my friend so so stong in image and words thank you
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Date: 11/18/2010 4:38:00 PM
I felt I was reading Louis McNeice prayer before birth. Good.
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Date: 11/18/2010 2:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ..hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. any help needed just ask any one.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv...
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Date: 11/18/2010 1:59:00 PM
Straight incredible & intense. Wow.
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:42:00 PM
deep write,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:31:00 AM
keep hope alive n keep your pen dancing. great you Jenifer. this is also to say welcome to the Soup, hope to read more of you! love, Adeleke
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