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Broken Sanity

Broken Sanity I'm broken I'm soaking Emotion breakdown, beware Theres not much, upstares Need damage repaired Before brain damage declared Mind clear of sticks and stones That may break me into moans Before the pain of alone Harms me The feeling alarms me Can you feel my scream Can you hear my pain See the evidence here In my dieing brain Am I thriving sane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2011 12:11:00 AM
This poem hit me...I can relate in many ways...thanks for sharing...
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:08:00 PM
Wow this is good. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 11/18/2010 6:07:00 PM
wow i love this piece here i feel all of this sometimes my friend so so stong in image and words thank you
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Date: 11/18/2010 4:38:00 PM
I felt I was reading Louis McNeice prayer before birth. Good.
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Date: 11/18/2010 2:59:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ..hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. any help needed just ask any one.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv...
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Date: 11/18/2010 1:59:00 PM
Straight incredible & intense. Wow.
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:42:00 PM
deep write,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:31:00 AM
keep hope alive n keep your pen dancing. great you Jenifer. this is also to say welcome to the Soup, hope to read more of you! love, Adeleke
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