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Broken Promises

I awoke to the dawn, Dreams of you were gone Lost in emotion, No will to go on I look for your smile, But you to were gone As I picture your face, My heart starts to break And Im reminded again, This love was all fake Silently I scream, Alone in this fate Longing for you, To take this pain away You said you were here, You promised you'd stay And Im broken a lil more, With each passing day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/9/2014 12:00:00 AM
Great one
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:25:00 AM
Very sad but very nice poem Angela! I want to give you a very warm welcome to Poetry Soup! Here you can meet lots of very friendly and talented poet friends. Hope you're happy here. Love peace and light! ;) xxxx D.
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:45:00 PM
Angela, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/23/2014 3:12:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Angela - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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