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Broken Promise

You made a promise and I trusted you with my heart, You promised love and I gave you my life. When you said help and cried, I rushed to be by your side. When I held out my arms into them you rushed, Held me oh so tight. But now I sit at night losing my mind, Crying till the daylight comes. You say I’m silly feeling this sad, When I say you don’t need me; That I’m crazy, But I know you no longer feel the same. If it’s time for me to go, Take this as true; I’ll always love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 11:42:00 AM
Hi Patrick,why do you love someone who doesn't care for you? read my poem, is it time for me to go? I thought your poem very thought provoking! take care, best of luck from barbara,
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