Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Broken Pieces Fall

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                                                   broken pieces fall
                                          shattered and scattered about
                                                    a reflection gone
                                                           ~~~
                                                    lost images fade
                                           as shadows pour and cover
                                                     just a memory
                                                           ~~~

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Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2012 at 7:08 PM One more before I wonder off... how about that concrete image of faded memories. Great senryu. It was nice stopping by... xox~pd

Dinda Minardi April 23, 2012 at 8:59 AM Memories, so many of them only the deepests stay! I acknowledge you've published your second book, Michael. Congratulations!!! hugs, Dinda.

Wilma Neels April 21, 2012 at 12:20 PM So many images jumping out at me while reading this one MJF! Enjoyed this tonight! Love Wilma

Laura Mckenzie April 18, 2012 at 1:24 PM This can be see in many different interpretations very nicely done! Laura :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 17, 2012 at 7:28 AM oh as for your senyru-- this is a very visual one for me, I can't help but imagine this, and hoping that some Great puzzle maker can piece them all together-- but ah that second one gives it some sort of peace for me, just a memory.... Maligayang Bati (Happy birthday in Filipino)! :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 17, 2012 at 7:27 AM Happy birthday to you, Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday, dearest Michael!!! Happy Birthday to you!! ^_^ I couldn't Not drop by to greet you a very warm and smiley happy birthday! I think I still made it, right? Save me a piece of birthday cake, ok? Wishing you more success, and more happiness with Rosanna! Continue surrounding yourself in love. and spreading that love! Birthday hugs to you!! ^_^!

Diana-Marie Bombardieri April 16, 2012 at 11:36 AM This is a really good little write:) I like the story these words tell.

Diana Mohammed April 15, 2012 at 1:29 PM It's a lovely write... Haunting..Thanks Michael! And thanks for your comments!... Love Diana

Bl Devnath April 15, 2012 at 10:39 AM Well done, Michael, loved and enjoyed the nice images of memory, loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen April 15, 2012 at 7:13 AM Like it Michael. - Have a nice birthday!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2012 at 6:59 AM an amazing portrait of phenomenal word play Michael luv.. every line draws a picture of intensity from your gifted pen and thought process luv..another Michael moment for thre JG of yours to be in poetic mode luv.. making it a new fav ..but they all are to me.. xoxo forever..