Broken Pieces

Dawn starts to break

With the tears in my eyes

Thinking of you all night

Makes me realized

What I felt for you

Makes my world fall apart

'Coz I know you can't be mine.


You treated me as someone special

You showed me love and care

But I fooled myself to believe you love me

'Coz I know we can't be more than friends.


I know it's not just admiration

I know it is real love

But I have to fight this feelings

'Coz I know it is not right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 20, 2015 at 10:49 PM
This is deep Verliza, I like the way you are honest to yourself. However, you need to think postive, and make him yours... SKAT
Gajeles Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Thank you for visiting my poem SKAT :) i made that poem way back when I was still suffering broken hearts :) Some of my poems are based on my feelings and myself. :) - Verliza
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July 20, 2015 at 4:35 AM
Sense and sensibility in some verses of good hope, where my ship got along, near and nearer to see the shinning tears of love.Smile.
Gajeles Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 6:28 AM
Thank you for reading my poem. Smile Ovidiu :)
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