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Broken Monoku

Dump oil in the ocean, kill sea life To save the environment!! For Brian's contest, Broken Monoku

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Date: 5/10/2010 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on being on the Hot Poems list..Sara
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Date: 5/4/2010 2:46:00 PM
What a horrible, awful mess. I am so frustrated with how long it's taken them to take action. Praying for the environment & all the poor helpless animals this oil slick as effected.
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Date: 5/3/2010 7:40:00 PM
What a mess they made just to get that dang OIL...greedy fools, good write...thanks on Drug test...glad that you liked it,,well we can always wish???? Danny
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:30:00 PM
oops very bad..awful stupid people..HUGS I was going to say very cute too but I can't :(
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:22:00 PM
And it just happend again .. so brutal to the living creatures of the ocean and land too.. great theme for your entry.. good luck... with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 7:48:00 AM
We are witnessing a catastrophy of unparalled proportions in the Gulf of Mexico. I can't imagine how this will be handled. Very prophetic work Doris. JT
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Date: 5/3/2010 5:30:00 AM
Great idea for the contest...Someone somewhere made some horrible mistake with the design or technical part of building that drill site...Keep the creative pen flowing..Did Ashley come home? Mom
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:30:00 AM
Well penned write, Doris! Wish you success in the contest and thanks for your comments...Gert
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:03:00 PM
Very interesting and thoughtful. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:07:00 PM
interesting!
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:13:00 PM
thanks again hope you do well in contest
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:29:00 PM
Nice write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/1/2010 2:33:00 PM
Interesting form. Irony! Good write. Love, daver
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Date: 5/1/2010 12:56:00 PM
I like it Doris.......Good Luck....And Yes the Ghost Story is true.....We all saw it plus several other families before and after us
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:47:00 AM
very nice good luck in the contest faleshia
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:28:00 AM
Looks like a winner, good luck in the contest.
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