Broken Monoku

Dump oil in the ocean, kill sea life

                                            To save the environment!!



For Brian's contest, Broken Monoku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on being on the Hot Poems list..Sara
W Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 2:46 PM
What a horrible, awful mess. I am so frustrated with how long it's taken them to take action. Praying for the environment & all the poor helpless animals this oil slick as effected.
Nunn Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 7:40 PM
What a mess they made just to get that dang OIL...greedy fools, good write...thanks on Drug test...glad that you liked it,,well we can always wish???? Danny
Guzzi Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 4:30 PM
oops very bad..awful stupid people..HUGS I was going to say very cute too but I can't :(
Sweetheart Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 2:22 PM
And it just happend again .. so brutal to the living creatures of the ocean and land too.. great theme for your entry.. good luck... with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Trusty Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 7:48 AM
We are witnessing a catastrophy of unparalled proportions in the Gulf of Mexico. I can't imagine how this will be handled. Very prophetic work Doris. JT
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Great idea for the contest...Someone somewhere made some horrible mistake with the design or technical part of building that drill site...Keep the creative pen flowing..Did Ashley come home? Mom
Knop Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Well penned write, Doris! Wish you success in the contest and thanks for your comments...Gert
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Very interesting and thoughtful. Good luck in the contest
Byrne Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 7:07 PM
interesting!
Beam Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 5:13 PM
thanks again hope you do well in contest
Hilliker Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Nice write. Good luck in the contest.
Austin Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Interesting form. Irony! Good write. Love, daver
Belt Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 12:56 PM
I like it Doris.......Good Luck....And Yes the Ghost Story is true.....We all saw it plus several other families before and after us
Murphy Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:47 AM
very nice good luck in the contest faleshia
Nutter Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Looks like a winner, good luck in the contest.
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