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Broken Limb

On a large elm tree, there hung a young broken branch swaying in the wind Tenaciously it clung, as it perilously swung Hanging on for dear life by a sliver of vine And I beheld in nature something so divine A broken limb struggling to mend Refusing to die ... to give in Then I understood: I too must try, fight desperately to live For a broken heart too can heal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/8/2017 11:15:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I agree with Chris, great analogy in this well written poem. Good content, good imagery and rhymes. I must say I liked this poem, I liked it alot. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/7/2017 1:29:00 PM
So true Freddie. I like this poem :)
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Date: 4/7/2017 1:22:00 PM
Just make sure it hangs on tightly and it will surely heal my friend. Love the analogy here, a broken limb hanging on, very creative.
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Date: 4/7/2017 1:21:00 PM
Nice one Freddie :)
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