Broken Hearts, Broken Things

This Poem Was Written In Math Class Passing Notes Between My Best Friend Jess (Rain) 
And I...Its Dedicated To John Hauser And Justice Hoffman. The Savages Of Our Hearts. 
It Starts With Her And Goes To Me. B = Brooke, R = Raiin...Gottit? Awesome. Hope 
You Enjoy, We Didnt Agree On A Name But This Will Be Posted On Both Hers And Mine
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B: Looking out the window, what do you see?
    Can you see the pain you cause me?
R: A smile on my face, can you see through my lies
    I hide the pain filled tears behind hazel eyes
B: The tears fall, are you there to see them
    All you see are the lies i hide
R: Never to know the blood i cry
    Passing looks between these sighs
B: How close we are, changed our ways
    Being friends hurts the same
R: Uncomprehensible, i dont know what it means
     With every glance, smile, tear, dream and scream
B: This pain is real, my love is true
     We made one, now we are two
R: Broken apart, you say never again
     I scream in my mind, ill never be the same
B: You say that you love her, can it be real
    Have you fallen too fast, your heart did she steal
    As you did mine in that short time
R: Im wandering around, lost without you by my side
    Scared that with this cruelty my heart will die
B: I have no feeling, my blood runs cold
    The world goes dark, everything is blank
R: My frozen heart you have shanked
     im falling into day dreams now, you ask if im okay and i want to shout out
     No!!
B: Cant you see what you have been doing to me?
    You are still killing me
R: Broken till the end, and i still dont want to be, just really close friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/19/2009 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Brooke. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:42:00 PM
funny how some poems are written in math class (it's the same with me :) This is a wonderful poem, you and your friend have captured a great loss wonderfully! tell Jess that i think she's an awesome poet jut like you are. (P.S. I truely think this :) ------Ell
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