Richard Lamoureux Poet Acrostic

Broken Hearts

Broken hearts don't always heal
Regrets may break the seal
Opened then crushed
Killed by Loves demands
Erasing all hope
No longer in command

Hearts that are damaged
Eventually will slow
After life's hardships
Repairs start to show
Tossed onto a pile
Such a sad place to go



Attempting a different style. Hope you enjoy.

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Casarah Nance July 25, 2014 at 4:24 PM I love acrostic poems now, and you got the beat down with the end rhymes too, I dig it that way, you got skills and I'm glad to be back reading ya sweets

Debbie Guzzi November 10, 2012 at 11:26 AM Good job, it's a relaxing form because you don't have to use meter, or rhyme. You might like to try the ABC form next? Make sure to note there are 2 different ways of doing it ;) Thanks so much for reading my work. Light & Love

Jack Ellison November 10, 2012 at 6:08 AM Great acrostic! Must try my hand at one of these! Your first attempt was a success! Have a great B.C. day! Jack Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2012 at 6:45 AM Thanks my friend

Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2012 at 8:20 PM awee... so sad... I hate the feeling. , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2012 at 11:21 PM You are so nice for someone who is a destroyer. I think you are a sweetheart.

Laila Andresen Mjelde November 9, 2012 at 1:28 PM Hey hey Richard, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot. Hugs - Laila