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Broken Hearts

Broken hearts don't always heal Regrets may break the seal Opened then crushed Killed by Loves demands Erasing all hope No longer in command Hearts that are damaged Eventually will slow After life's hardships Repairs start to show Tossed onto a pile Such a sad place to go Attempting a different style. Hope you enjoy.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/25/2014 4:24:00 PM

I love acrostic poems now, and you got the beat down with the end rhymes too, I dig it that way, you got skills and I'm glad to be back reading ya sweets

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2012 11:26:00 AM

Good job, it's a relaxing form because you don't have to use meter, or rhyme. You might like to try the ABC form next? Make sure to note there are 2 different ways of doing it ;) Thanks so much for reading my work. Light & Love

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/10/2012 6:08:00 AM

Great acrostic! Must try my hand at one of these! Your first attempt was a success! Have a great B.C. day! Jack

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/10/2012 6:45:00 AM

Thanks my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2012 8:20:00 PM

awee... so sad... I hate the feeling. , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2012 11:21:00 PM

You are so nice for someone who is a destroyer. I think you are a sweetheart.

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 11/9/2012 1:28:00 PM

Hey hey Richard, today I am on P.S. looking, it is a long time since I've been here but now I'm here to read your poems, in the hope that you will read my latest poem, I liked your poem a lot. Hugs - Laila