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trust cracks appear unshed tears smile we fear love’s lost 08-May-2022

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Date: 5/8/2022 3:51:00 PM
A fine than-bauk, Unseeking Seeker.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/8/2022 6:42:00 PM
It certainly is harder than it looks, but you handled it perfectly in this little poem.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/8/2022 6:26:00 PM
Thanks Milt! I find this compact, syllable shifting form difficult

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