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Broken Hearted Child

Broken Hearted Child You did your best, while you could Until it ended like a knife cutting sharp I was taken from you where I stood Memories played a song like a harp A song that played through the years Times of freedom where I could be me Carrying me through days and nights of fears When it was you, I needed to see It never should have happened that way Misplaced where I didn’t belong Silenced, without being able to say All that happened that was wrong I lived in a world, laws didn’t mean a thing To those who did the crimes in front of me I played piano and I tried to sing Made promises to speak later, of what I see Here I am, writing words from years ago About when they forced you to leave Wishing only that you could know A broken hearted child, still grieves Heidi Sands 3/28/18

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Date: 3/29/2018 3:02:00 PM
A very sad one! Life can be so hard!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2018 3:08:00 PM
Yes, thank you Kim :)
Date: 3/29/2018 1:11:00 PM
A sad, but touching poem Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Gary! :)
Date: 3/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
Such sad memories Heidi, well told...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Charlie :)
Date: 3/29/2018 11:07:00 AM
Powerful and realistic poem that each one can see himself! Excellently done dear, Heidi!
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Date: 3/29/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios :)
Date: 3/29/2018 11:06:00 AM
A very sad memory Heidi...Well expressed
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 3/29/2018 7:51:00 AM
So well expressed, Heidi. It's amazing how powerful those early memories and experiences really are. I have a few of my own. Happy Thursday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Yes, we all have some things from earlier on and it can be very powerful. I bet you can write about yours very well. I appreciate your comment. Happy Thursday!
Date: 3/29/2018 6:22:00 AM
A sad, powerful depiction. Memories never depart from such hurt..well articulated, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/29/2018 7:56:00 AM
True Vijay. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 3/28/2018 5:40:00 PM
You read my tarnished reflection poem so you know that this poem hits close to home
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/28/2018 5:42:00 PM
Yes Frederic. No matter what happens in those days, it remains with us. Thank you for your visit. :)
Date: 3/28/2018 5:17:00 PM
You wrote with innocence in your ink...All the best Heidi...Happy Easter...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/28/2018 5:18:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Arturo. Happy Easter to you too! :)

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