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Broken Hearted

sadly the heart beats
world oblivious to pain
death patiently waits


7/3/2018
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Trifiatis Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Thunderous Haiku! Very powerful dear, Eve!
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Awesome, Eve. A poignant write.
Yvonne Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Very creative. A Fav. Just posted a new poem. I would love to get your input.
One Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 4:33 PM
Death waits for all of us... A sad haiku..
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 3:43 PM
such sad lines Eve:-( hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 3:31 PM
- Painful poem, Eve - Beautifully written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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