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Broken Heart: Wounded Soul

reflected moonlight in a stream face contorted with fear blurred vision from falling tears dejected, I heard her scream He broke her heart and wounded her soul Alone, she tests the water not minding that it's cold

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Date: 10/11/2017 1:49:00 PM
What a title, amazing write, and I really liked that last line!
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Date: 10/11/2017 11:55:00 AM
The imagery especially in the first stanza is so sad, I hope the water warms for her Raw heartbreak is hard to deal with:-( hugs jan xx
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