Broken Heart

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BROKEN HEART

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Underestimate not the tears of a broken heart for they may flood the orchard of love! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 24 August 2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/24/2016 1:41:00 PM

Delightful vision in to the depth of heart's strength. You are a great philosopher poet. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/24/2016 8:47:00 AM

You express so vividly with so few words. Beautiful!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you my friend, Richard, for noticing! Great to see you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2016 7:42:00 AM

- An ocean of tears, my friend - The pain of a broken heart is that your body perceives it as physical pain - Love activates the same neurological reward centers as cocaine, and losing love can feel like going through withdrawal after quitting drugs or alcohol ....... really painful and much water :) - Lovely written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2016 7:56:00 AM

I have loved a lot in my life dear Anne-Lise, but never had drugs not even a simple cigarette so I do not know how they feel but I relate to love and the loss of it! Thank you for your constructive comment! Hugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2016 7:33:00 AM

A line many can relate to Demetrios -great words of wisdom my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2016 7:57:00 AM

Jan, how wonderful your visit my friend! Thank you so much for your gracious comment!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/24/2016 5:54:00 AM

Devastatingly beautiful ... Really ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2016 7:58:00 AM

You are spoiling me my dear friend, Probir! Thank you so much for precious visit and comment!