Hasan Javed Poet Rhyme

Broken Heart

Broken Heart


                                    I have been loved and I have been thrown
                                             It's nobody's fault but my own

                              I thought I was not alone,I thought it was you and me
                                      But believing you ended up in you leaving me

                                   Now I don't trust no more, giving my heart away
                                                No I won't do this no more

                                   

                                                       By: Hasan Javed

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Dr.Ram Mehta May 6, 2014 at 6:45 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, hasan

Deborah Shiells May 4, 2014 at 11:00 PM Hi Hasan, This write was a powerhouse. Nicely done:~) Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Congrats on this being featured. Peace, Deborah

Tonya Mudd April 19, 2014 at 12:28 PM i've always thought that but in the end i still end up loving someone even after i've hurt them, it's just who we are. Hasan Javed April 19, 2014 at 1:18 PM I think its in our nature that we forgive even after we are hurt, maybe that's what differentiates us from animals...but maybe even animals forgive other animals, maybe it's the way of life....but its true that the one we love, no matter how bad it hurts, we always have a soft corner for that special somewhere in our heart

Jerry T Curtis April 19, 2014 at 6:25 AM As soon as you have given up And plan to go your way As soon as you no longer look You'll meet Her on that day With seven and a half billion people on this planet.........You shouldn't even have to try Good Fortune Hasan Hasan Javed April 19, 2014 at 8:13 AM nice one buddy :)

Peninnah Nganga April 19, 2014 at 4:56 AM Love breaks us all Hasan,take heart! Hasan Javed April 19, 2014 at 5:24 AM true that

Verlena S. Walker April 19, 2014 at 3:36 AM Beautiful Hasan... Verlena Hasan Javed April 19, 2014 at 4:18 AM Thanks Verlena...I will post few more