Richard Mcclellan Poet Haiku

Broken Heart

one heart black an blue
abandon cold immortal few
love annihilate by you

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bleeding in duress
a knife stabbed thy love to death
the heart is split into

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life in emptiness
blackened loneliness
covered thorny wreath

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please save loveless me
love fountain do cleanse over thee
father time repair

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love overjoyed
open heart wishful warmness
amorousness gold

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2012 at 1:39 PM PS. I have sent you a soup mail

Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2012 at 12:40 PM It is a beautiful poem Richard...touching... Broken heart can fixed (glue). A happy heart live longer Richard...be happy. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise Richard Mcclellan February 3, 2012 at 12:48 PM Thanks so much Anne! I suffer from depression but I am trying my best to be happy!

Poet Destroyer A February 2, 2012 at 9:43 PM Richard... this is more like free verse... but, I truly did enjoy stopping by tonight... this is about the way i feel right now.. My daughter has broken my heart... she beats it with out a heart beat... she has annihilated all i've thought her... oh..well sob sob!... had fun reading this 3 times...always..pd Richard Mcclellan February 3, 2012 at 11:42 AM Ok DP, I added more lines to it... lol

Pedro Beauvoir February 2, 2012 at 12:18 PM it"s alright Pedro Beauvoir February 3, 2012 at 1:22 PM that is realy an amezine haiku Richard Mcclellan February 2, 2012 at 4:08 PM really that's it... I got a full version that is not traditional Haiku... lol