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Broken Heart

i cannont feel any more because he turned by heart cold and soild he dont understand how i feel for him i love him but he dont love me so my heart is broken he used me he never loved me he is as cold and evil as the winter season he will never know what he did to me i wish he would love me the i do but he wont so i will never love anyone ever again he broke my heart and now its as cold and solid as a rock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 9:28:00 AM
work on your grammer sweetie and this could be better. its a nice poem but your lack of proper spelling/grammer take away from it. please dont be mad, just some helpful critisim <3
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Date: 2/3/2010 5:27:00 AM
nice. -filled_W/_Anger
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Date: 2/2/2010 8:50:00 PM
Hey Tabitha, is this about you? I am so sorry. Please don't lock your heart away. The right person may come knocking and will find the door locked. Just take your time to heal and then let it be. Take care, dear. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:11:00 AM
Great love loss poem filled full of emotion. I hope just a topic and not your life's experience. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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