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Broken Halo Blues...

the love I had for you has faded away 
and vanished into moonlit skies
like the smoke from a candle blown out 
for the night, disappearing as it flies

but like the scent of the candle 
I still can smell your perfume on the covers
and as I lay my head down to rest
I still sometimes wish we were lovers

but you know that could never ensue
because it’s hard to love someone 
whose halo has broken in two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 12:38:00 PM
and do you have a halo? Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2009 10:40:00 AM
It's sad when a lover disappoints us and the "candle is blown out," Luke. If you still miss her, perhaps you can help men her halo. Forgiveness is what God always offers us; perhaps we should learn to forgive others as well, even when they have hurt us. I was moved by your well-penned poem, Luke.
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Date: 4/22/2009 10:21:00 AM
This made my eyes well up with tears. Its so sad when your halo gets tarnished
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