Broken Glass

unclosed eyes lose you
split dream drowns in flood of tears…
half-full broken glass


July 10, 2019
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Callus Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 12:38 PM
One can feel the pain of loss in these words, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Congrat on the win. It really is one of the best ones on the winner list.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 1:10 PM
I like that combo half-full broken glass! Congratulations!
Mitra Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Very deep,.. loved to ponder this one. Congrats
Kitchin Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu, I liked the last line!
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:01 PM
stark imagery. Nicely done.
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