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Broken Glass

unclosed eyes lose you split dream drowns in flood of tears… half-full broken glass July 10, 2019 Syllable count checked on howmanysyllable.com

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Date: 7/17/2019 12:38:00 PM
One can feel the pain of loss in these words, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/16/2019 1:10:00 PM
I like that combo half-full broken glass! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2019 9:38:00 PM
Very deep,.. loved to ponder this one. Congrats
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Date: 7/15/2019 6:59:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu, I liked the last line!
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