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Broken Glass

unclosed eyes lose you split dream drowns in flood of tears… half-full broken glass July 10, 2019 Syllable count checked on howmanysyllable.com

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2019 12:38:00 PM

One can feel the pain of loss in these words, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:15:00 PM

Congrat on the win. It really is one of the best ones on the winner list.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2019 1:10:00 PM

I like that combo half-full broken glass! Congratulations!

Debjani Mitra

Date: 7/15/2019 9:38:00 PM

Very deep,.. loved to ponder this one. Congrats

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/15/2019 6:59:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu, I liked the last line!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2019 3:01:00 PM

stark imagery. Nicely done.