Broken Freindship

Hey there friend, 

yes you....don't be staring like you haven't got a clue 

when you were down you stuck to me like glue 

now that your on the rise you gave me a shocking surprise 

i didn't want see it but i had to open my eyes 

to the way you treat me and all your bare faced lies 

we've being through it all and sometime won nothing at all 

i didn't see this coming ignoring me most of all 

it isn't a crime nor is it a sin,fix your face i hate that grin 

this isn't a cry nor is it a plead but i had valued our friendship 

it didn't came with ease but for some reason its leaving with the breeze 

you had called me your "brother" and some time "a friend like no other" 

now you don't even call i guess you can't even bother 

stay on your high horse i only hope you enjoy the view 

because as much as you can't see me i can see you 

and the cloud that you're sitting on is the same you will fall from 

and you will be back here down to ground one 

the world is round keep behaving like a clown 

those peer's you have now won't always be around 

i was there from the start when even the food we ate was running short 

i have been there no matter what weather have start 

we said we were friends and friends to the end 

ohhhhhhhhhh now i see...... 

this is the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/19/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:29:00 PM
Roje, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:05:00 AM
ROJE, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
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Date: 2/23/2009 10:49:00 AM
i know exactly how you feel. i hope your friendship will never be replaced by anyone else, i know it hurts but it is life. the end has come for everything and everyone.
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