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Broken faith

traitors breath love betrayed broken faith Lori Lucas McClure For contest Ellip sponsored by Gigno 2/28/13

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Date: 6/15/2015 9:37:00 PM
And then we ask God why.
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Date: 5/8/2013 7:49:00 AM
so much packed into so little. love it, Kathy
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:49:00 PM
WOW Straight and to the point! Congrats! Big hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:21:00 PM
belated congrats on your win...David
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Date: 3/5/2013 1:25:00 PM
Actually one of my favorites I've read for the contest...nicely done
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Date: 3/5/2013 8:31:00 AM
Once betrayed...so hard to trust again. Strong voice in your few words. Congrats on your HM in the contest !!
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Date: 3/5/2013 8:11:00 AM
Way to go on the contest!
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Date: 3/5/2013 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Lori xx
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Date: 3/4/2013 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Lori. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/4/2013 10:15:00 AM
Lori, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/4/2013 9:00:00 AM
never mind the contest, this moves me.. just love this...
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Date: 2/28/2013 9:01:00 PM
!!!
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Date: 2/28/2013 4:46:00 PM
enraging!!!
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