Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Haiku

Broken Faith

traitors breath
                                         love betrayed
                                         broken faith




Lori Lucas McClure
For contest Ellip sponsored by Gigno
2/28/13

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Robert Johnson June 15, 2015 at 9:37 PM And then we ask God why.

Kathryn Collins May 8, 2013 at 7:49 AM so much packed into so little. love it, Kathy

Jack Ellison March 15, 2013 at 1:49 PM WOW Straight and to the point! Congrats! Big hugs, Jack xox

David Williams March 7, 2013 at 1:21 PM belated congrats on your win...David

Painted Hunter March 5, 2013 at 1:25 PM Actually one of my favorites I've read for the contest...nicely done

Debra Squyres March 5, 2013 at 8:31 AM Once betrayed...so hard to trust again. Strong voice in your few words. Congrats on your HM in the contest !!

David Fisher March 5, 2013 at 8:11 AM Way to go on the contest!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 5, 2013 at 1:55 AM Congrats on your win Lori xx

Audrey Haick March 4, 2013 at 11:52 AM Congratulations on your very fine win, Lori. Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2013 at 10:15 AM Lori, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA

Harry Horsman March 4, 2013 at 9:00 AM never mind the contest, this moves me.. just love this...

... Gigno February 28, 2013 at 9:01 PM !!!

John Loving Iii February 28, 2013 at 4:46 PM enraging!!!