Broken Dreams

Broken dreams cause pain
Shards of shattered hopefulness
Take care where you tread.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Well penned, Wendy. Congrats on your win.
Ashley Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Broken dreams can cut to the quick and the potency of your short poem expresses this eloquently, Wendy. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:17 PM
Nicely done and nicely won! Congrats, Wendy.
Marc Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Excellent!
Man Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Hi Wendy.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you. Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Man Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Not yet.. I don't have those skills!
Watson Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Thanks for all the encouragement! I have dipped into some of your emotive and cleverly executed pieces and as per my last post, wondered if you set them to music?
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