Ali Hammoud Poet Verse

Broken Dream

Empty room with no windows
just things made out of stones.
 
A broken dream reflecting images
from another world.
 
A tree atop of a wide cobbled stairs,
leading to afar place.

White pages left empty no words
to describe my aching heart.

No rainbow, no colours just a grey sky.

Waking up is a relief from this
broken dream.

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Skat A January 4, 2016 at 1:24 PM this is deep Ali Hammoud January 4, 2016 at 2:27 PM Thanks.

Dalia Shahein December 29, 2015 at 7:04 PM Remarkable poem my friend in Lebanon , ur my neighbor....Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia Ali Hammoud January 4, 2016 at 2:28 PM Thanks Dalia, Merry xmas and happy new year to you. xx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2013 at 10:58 AM Ali, a touching poem - very well written! - (Get out in the sun, be happy!!) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Ali Hammoud January 4, 2016 at 2:30 PM No chance here in England, just grey sky haha. Thanks xx

Ali Hammoud March 31, 2013 at 2:31 AM Hi, you give so much encouragement that I want to impress you even more dear Leonora, thanks again and again happy Easter to you too! Hugs and love, ali xoxoxo

Len Gasun March 30, 2013 at 8:22 PM This is a beautifully sad poem my dear friend Ali. I've enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you so much for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poem dedicated to all mothers. Happy Easter and best wishes always! love and hugs, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2013 at 3:44 PM Hello Ali, it's been a while since I've seen you on line. Hope you are well? about your poem: The imagery is deep, and sad... I don't like the feel of broken dreams.... every line is well done,,,always~ LINDA