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Broken dream

Empty room with no windows just things made out of stones. A broken dream reflecting images from another world. A tree atop of a wide cobbled stairs, leading to afar place. White pages left empty no words to describe my aching heart. No rainbow, no colours just a grey sky. Waking up is a relief from this broken dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/4/2016 1:24:00 PM
this is deep
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ali hammoud
Date: 1/4/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 12/29/2015 7:04:00 PM
Remarkable poem my friend in Lebanon , ur my neighbor....Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia
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ali hammoud
Date: 1/4/2016 2:28:00 PM
Thanks Dalia, Merry xmas and happy new year to you. xx
Date: 4/4/2013 10:58:00 AM
Ali, a touching poem - very well written! - (Get out in the sun, be happy!!) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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ali hammoud
Date: 1/4/2016 2:30:00 PM
No chance here in England, just grey sky haha. Thanks xx
Date: 3/31/2013 2:31:00 AM
Hi, you give so much encouragement that I want to impress you even more dear Leonora, thanks again and again happy Easter to you too! Hugs and love, ali xoxoxo
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Date: 3/30/2013 8:22:00 PM
This is a beautifully sad poem my dear friend Ali. I've enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you so much for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poem dedicated to all mothers. Happy Easter and best wishes always! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/19/2013 3:44:00 PM
Hello Ali, it's been a while since I've seen you on line. Hope you are well? about your poem: The imagery is deep, and sad... I don't like the feel of broken dreams.... every line is well done,,,always~ LINDA
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