Broken Dream

light endeavors burn

dream a broken dream ..lost fire ? 

believe ..keep up faith !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:09 AM
Very profound message-CHARMA
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Interesting and encouraging thoughts that you have penned here in this one...Keep up the creative writing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.. Sara
Brown Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:52 AM
I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Marcus. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Marcus, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
Moreno Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Inspirational nice conclusion...Raul
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April 21, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Well done have, enjoyed have a nice one..p.d.
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