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Broken Dove

Forever in the mist above Salacious rumour long will be Conspirators who gather see The smashing of the charming dove The ignorant make haste to cry To strip this victim to its bone And never stopping to ask why And never for their sins atone Forever in the mist above The absent bird with broken wing No longer with the heart to sing A tragic sight bereft of love Still yahoos gossip with no care They live for now so feckless free And never stopping on the tare And wonder how its life might be Forever in the mist above The consequence is almost dead Except remorse thats in the head Of one yahoo that courage drove Contagious is the shame it seeds Through hapless hoards regretful now Who sorry for their reckless deeds The broken dove will not allow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/18/2010 6:26:00 PM
Great write, David! Although dealing with the reality of our current world of carelessness, it seems. Wrote a poem with a similar title, "A dove with a broken wing". Check it out, when you have the time.
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:28:00 AM
Super sensitive write David and very intense passion in your lines so creative.. hope u are doing well my friend.. not heard from u in a while..luv.. so have a happy day and be blessed with luv.. my friend..
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Date: 11/15/2010 6:59:00 PM
Hey David, enjoyed reading your work today! Hope you are well.
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