For Karen Jones Contest Favories Footle, dated July 12, 2026
sunrise surprise today The day first date I wait nerves tense live sense mind swims on dreams I search rose bunch florist shows list red rose I choose sunset I’m set she comes breeze hums says hi pitch high sounds spurt my heart flower charms her fingers fold she holds thorn pricks she shrieks rose flakes date breaks
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