Broken Barriers

Barriers cracked and chipped with age
Once standing firm now tremble in rage.
To regain their solidity once defined,
That now lies uncertain,
Its’ strength resigned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mills Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 4:28 PM
sounds brutally honest and poignant. Ear raising and one to contemplate. Keep the ink flowing! It was definately food for thought,
Wilcox Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 4:01 PM
I Like It! Awesome Job.
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 3:59 PM
Very descriptive write presented here. Keep the creative lines coming. Sara
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