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Broken Balloon

you didn’t know how you broke my balloon heart gloomy clouds melted in the sky of my eyes, and in torrent of tears dreams floated away with the torn petals of flower called love that bloomed in my garden all through the years until one dismal night storm came and crushed it creating the debris of me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ you broke my ba ll heart ~~~ gl oo my c c l ode me l ted t e a res d r e a m ~~~~~ f ~~~l o at e d a w a y ~~ b ~~~di ~~~n ~~~i g h t ~~~~~ ~~~~~ c r ~~~~~ s h w e ~~~~ d d e b ~~~~~ r i s f ~~~cr ~~~~~o ~~~~~ f ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ b ~~~ r ~~~~~ k ~~ e ~~~ m ~~~~~~~e ~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 4/9/2025 2:21:00 PM
what a heartbreaking poem indeed Subimal and I love the creative shape especially the second part which is brilliantly executed! hugs jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/9/2025 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your read, Jan and for your wonderful comments that I appreciate very much.

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