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For: This or That, Vol. 40

Sponsor: Edward Ibeh 

August 10, 2026
Chaos

BROKEN ANTENNA

Because you were my compass
Reality has become chaotic,
Ordinary time has become extraordinary~
Kinetic,
Energetic,
Nonsensical…

Again the night is filled with static,
Never the soft music of a lullaby 
To safely wrap me in dreams~
Eden has fallen away,
Now only the nakedness of bereavement,
Now only the unending loneliness 
And a pharmacy bereft of cures.
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Ibeh Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Chetta😊🙏 I enjoyed it.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 4:05 PM
the ending line was perfect! nicely done!
Harp Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Very good images here in BROKEN ANTENNA, Chetta. Best of luck. The last line is especially good. Wraps it up nicely. Moon Harp
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Your "BROKEN ANTENNA" is a wonderful write. What a great read with a great picture. "Good Luck" Have A Fun Day Writing Away...............
Dawson Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:40 PM
A moving well written poem with imagery that draws the reader in; Many blessings to you!
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