Broken and Tore

I really love you
                                  But you love someone else
                                        when i see you 
                                    I Cant close my eyes
                     I Just want you to say how much you care about me
                                 But you love someone else 
                      I just want to hear "i love you" out of your mouth
                                      I hear it in my mind
                                      Its just like a sound
                                      But its just a dream
                               Because you love someone else
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Murphy Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 1:05 PM
enjoyed reading this today brandon. hope to read more in the near future:)
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March 10, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Nice poem, i enjoyed reading it, I especially like the verses I just want to hear "I love you" out of your mouth, this can mean so much to a lover who really needs to just hear it come from someone he or she loves, Keep writing (smile)
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March 10, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Brandon it is sweet......and touching...She love someone else Brandon !!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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