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Broken

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Broken

We used to be a team
But all we ever did was scream
The love is gone
Your bags are on the lawn
You make my head spin
When you use to make me grin
Why try when we can cry 
You're the guy that makes me feel like I'm dying
Forget the memories
Forget the stories
We just had to meet
You were sweet
Now, you treat me like crap
And I'm traped 
I just want to go
But you won't let the marks show
You keep me inside
Hoping I would die
All this time, you were doing a crime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 7/11/2017 2:31:00 PM
Naderia a beutiful love oem I enjoyed.
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:22:00 PM
James well said.
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:06:00 PM
I say LEAVE HIM!!!!
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