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Broken 9/11/09

Broken is the path that I have walked, lost are the things that I never really had. Broken are the dreams that still remain, wrong are the ways I had been living. Broken was the heart of such a lost soul, changed is the life of the willing person. Broken are the thoughts I no longer have, healed is the wound that left such a scar.

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/28/2010 4:20:00 PM

A long hard road has been traveled and much pain inflected. A sad beginning with a happy ending. My kind of poem, Well written, wonderful flow and imagery. Mac

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2010 8:57:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lisa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Diane Christian

Date: 1/28/2010 3:40:00 AM

the good Lord always promises us restoration and your words just prove he never breaks a single promise, he will restore us time and time again even better and stronger than before, God bles you from diane

Anthony Nutter

Date: 1/28/2010 3:09:00 AM

I loved the beginning, because we are all broken. I loved the ending because we can all be made whole. Excellent write from beginning to end.

Bojosi Ditshwele

Date: 1/28/2010 12:20:00 AM

I love this, a change for good, born again thats great of you. Enjoyed the poem