Broken

Bemused girl where did she go

Running from her sins she committed long ago

Opaque she disguised herself like a pro

Kindness she craved for someone to show

Echoing voices repeating she would never grow

No eventually she would be free of this plateau
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mahomaile Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Mesmerizing writing..Rahab
Salehi Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:34 AM
On a sunless day on this autumn she will know..... or may be when the thunder is chasing the snow..... very nice
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October 27, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Wow.... Amazing.....skat
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October 25, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Well done Sofia...
Gholami Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:32 PM
What a write! powerful! Please review and let me know what you think of my latest poem as well :)
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