Broken

my white flag
surrender
i wish it could be forever
we cant go on you and me
we've lost each others melodies
for me its goodbye
it doesn't matter how hard you tried
"is there something you can do"
too many times 
too few.

my white flag 
surrender
my hands unfold
the story that was always there
but never told
if i could go on
i know deep down its wrong
it just isn't meant to be
and its my heart that let me see
your not the one for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 10:50 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:51 PM
COLLEEN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 6, 2015 at 12:54 PM
COLLEEN, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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