Broken

Broken I do not feel My skin is numb when touched Still waiting for the day to come Repair ©Holly P. Moore November 2012

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Matthew Anish

Date: 11/19/2012 12:36:00 PM

Very nice use of this modern form! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/19/2012 7:57:00 AM

Dear Holly, Slowly they come, signs of repair but no timetable forward and backward, with many u-turns along the way. I'm speaking only for myself. I am so struck by your soul touching poem. Hang in. love, Kathy

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/18/2012 3:09:00 PM

Holly, I sense immense hope from this beautiful poem...nice...jimbo

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2012 10:31:00 AM

Holly I can't say the pain will ever go or if you even want it to go, but death is the part of life that makes us stronger, love the form you chose...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2012 10:09:00 AM

So.... sad Holly. - Read my last poem, "I cry with you" - it's for you. - big hug from me // Anne-Lise :)