Broken

A moment will pass
 
for will our love ever last 

time will only tell im forever under your spell

every second my mind thinks 
every second my heart beats 
every second i turn i remember your not here

for my life will pass like falling glass

cut will never heal.   

                                                                  the nightwalker ..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bangalee Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 3:07 AM
vert nice that is
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October 11, 2010 at 11:23 AM
very nice, thank you for complementing my works. i really love this one though, it reminds me of things that happened in my life a few years back. love it ,sammy
Gibbons Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 9:07 AM
cut that will never heal - life pass like falling glass. Wonderful imagery Jim Gibbons
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:25 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Duncan. Love, Carol
Miranda Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 5:55 PM
great poem!!!!
Hales Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Great write ..Ty for your kind comments sarah
Nutter Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Intriguing write, almost like a dream about your lover only to awaken and realize they are gone. Enjoyed the read.
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