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A moment will pass for will our love ever last time will only tell im forever under your spell every second my mind thinks every second my heart beats every second i turn i remember your not here for my life will pass like falling glass cut will never heal. the nightwalker ..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2021 3:07:00 AM
vert nice that is
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Date: 10/11/2010 11:23:00 AM
very nice, thank you for complementing my works. i really love this one though, it reminds me of things that happened in my life a few years back. love it ,sammy
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:07:00 AM
cut that will never heal - life pass like falling glass. Wonderful imagery Jim Gibbons
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:25:00 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Duncan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:55:00 PM
great poem!!!!
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Date: 10/3/2010 12:24:00 PM
Great write ..Ty for your kind comments sarah
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:38:00 AM
Intriguing write, almost like a dream about your lover only to awaken and realize they are gone. Enjoyed the read.
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