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Broken

So many words left unspoken

so many hearts that were broken

You told me so many lies

Now all I'm left with is your goodbyes

I wanted to know

I wasn't ready to let go

Why did you leave

I really thought I could beileve

All that we were

now it's all a blur

Too young to notice

I guess I just lost my focus

I was foolish but I can see

you never wanted me.

I was stupid,I was wrong

I should have known all along

Selfish thoughts and dreams

This whole thing came apart at the seams

No more hurt or pain

I will no longer love in vain

So this is my new call

I will look before I fall

So many words left unspoken

But here's to this one...

I can never be broken!!!

Copyright © The Melody Sings | Year Posted 2010

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Richard-Jamaal Keen Date: 6/9/2010 10:12:00 PM You are stronger than me my friend, I've been broken in dozens of ways and yet you took it better than most men could ever admit...great write! Login to Reply

Matthew Miles Date: 6/1/2010 1:33:00 AM It looks like you've dealt with this well. Stay strong if this is from experience. If it is just a poem. Then very nice. =) The rhythm certainly fits the words. <3 Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/18/2010 3:59:00 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Brittany. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Dakarai Cobb Date: 5/17/2010 3:09:00 PM i loved this poem. i loved the flow that framed the emotion. this is the type of poetry that can heal a broken heart. Login to Reply

Destiny Echo Date: 5/17/2010 12:55:00 PM I can realte to this :) Very nicely written. Keep up the good work :D -Echo Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/17/2010 10:52:00 AM what an ending to give life a positive out look, enjoyed ,..p.d. Login to Reply