The Melody Sings Poet Rhyme

Broken

So many words left unspoken

so many hearts that were broken

You told me so many lies

Now all I'm left with is your goodbyes

I wanted to know

I wasn't ready to let go

Why did you leave

I really thought I could beileve

All that we were

now it's all a blur

Too young to notice

I guess I just lost my focus

I was foolish but I can see

you never wanted me.

I was stupid,I was wrong

I should have known all along

Selfish thoughts and dreams

This whole thing came apart at the seams

No more hurt or pain

I will no longer love in vain

So this is my new call

I will look before I fall

So many words left unspoken

But here's to this one...

I can never be broken!!!

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Richard-Jamaal Keen June 9, 2010 at 10:12 PM You are stronger than me my friend, I've been broken in dozens of ways and yet you took it better than most men could ever admit...great write!

Matthew Miles June 1, 2010 at 1:33 AM It looks like you've dealt with this well. Stay strong if this is from experience. If it is just a poem. Then very nice. =) The rhythm certainly fits the words. <3

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2010 at 3:59 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Brittany. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

Dakarai Cobb May 17, 2010 at 3:09 PM i loved this poem. i loved the flow that framed the emotion. this is the type of poetry that can heal a broken heart.

Destiny Echo May 17, 2010 at 12:55 PM I can realte to this :) Very nicely written. Keep up the good work :D -Echo

Poet Destroyer A May 17, 2010 at 10:52 AM what an ending to give life a positive out look, enjoyed ,..p.d.