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Broken

So many words left unspoken so many hearts that were broken You told me so many lies Now all I'm left with is your goodbyes I wanted to know I wasn't ready to let go Why did you leave I really thought I could beileve All that we were now it's all a blur Too young to notice I guess I just lost my focus I was foolish but I can see you never wanted me. I was stupid,I was wrong I should have known all along Selfish thoughts and dreams This whole thing came apart at the seams No more hurt or pain I will no longer love in vain So this is my new call I will look before I fall So many words left unspoken But here's to this one... I can never be broken!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2010 10:12:00 PM
You are stronger than me my friend, I've been broken in dozens of ways and yet you took it better than most men could ever admit...great write!
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Date: 6/1/2010 1:33:00 AM
It looks like you've dealt with this well. Stay strong if this is from experience. If it is just a poem. Then very nice. =) The rhythm certainly fits the words. <3
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Date: 5/18/2010 3:59:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Brittany. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:09:00 PM
i loved this poem. i loved the flow that framed the emotion. this is the type of poetry that can heal a broken heart.
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Date: 5/17/2010 12:55:00 PM
I can realte to this :) Very nicely written. Keep up the good work :D -Echo
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:52:00 AM
what an ending to give life a positive out look, enjoyed ,..p.d.
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