Broken

A life built upon broken dreams
an ocean of what could have been
faith has died
hope is no more
illusion is all that remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Matheny Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:17 PM
AMAZING!!!!! Love Lexi!
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 10:06 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Donny. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 3:12 PM
Sad write full of hopeless thoughts...if this is true, I hope things get better...Raul
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