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Broken

How long will I be here? In the cold and the rain If I wait long enough It might numb the pain I remember the day When I first found you Our minds were care free Our love was true How wonderful it felt To know you loved me Little did I know How broken I'd be Worse than a bullet or skin torn apart Those can't compare To the ache in my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 1:47:00 PM
Again really nice poetry! Keep posting! - jeremiah
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:22:00 PM
Thrilling.
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Date: 4/19/2009 5:27:00 AM
Your pain shows through your poem. This heartfelt rhyming poem declares your love loss. Keep writing. God Bless you and help you through your pain. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/18/2009 1:05:00 PM
absolutely brilliant Meg :)
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:25:00 PM
short and sweet just how i like them and to the point no mumbo jumbo words from the heart i like :o) H
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