Broken

How long will I be here?
In the cold and the rain
If I wait long enough
It might numb the pain

I remember the day
When I first found you
Our minds were care free
Our love was true

How wonderful it felt
To know you loved me
Little did I know
How broken I'd be

Worse than a bullet
or skin torn apart
Those can't compare
To the ache in my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Again really nice poetry! Keep posting! - jeremiah
Shahwan Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Thrilling.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 5:27 AM
Your pain shows through your poem. This heartfelt rhyming poem declares your love loss. Keep writing. God Bless you and help you through your pain. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane
Whitty Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 1:05 PM
absolutely brilliant Meg :)
Charlton Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:25 PM
short and sweet just how i like them and to the point no mumbo jumbo words from the heart i like :o) H
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