Broken

You don't love me anymore 
And I don't care no more 
You've hurt me so much 

You said I'm your world 
But I was so blind that I couldn't see your lies 
You've hurt me so much
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Da Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:28 AM
Simply written and yet u have clearly conveyed the message..
Krutsinger Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Very simple, and in that there is an eloquence, Melody.
Man Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Melody.. you paint pain with a most vivid brush!
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