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Broken

You don't love me anymore And I don't care no more You've hurt me so much You said I'm your world But I was so blind that I couldn't see your lies You've hurt me so much

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/1/2018 3:28:00 AM
Simply written and yet u have clearly conveyed the message..
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:11:00 AM
Very simple, and in that there is an eloquence, Melody.
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Date: 7/27/2018 12:26:00 PM
Melody.. you paint pain with a most vivid brush!
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