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Broke Down Downtown

A lifeless body laid face down on the back alley wet sidewalk. This time of night no ones around especially now at three o’clock. I’m here because my car broke down Otherwise I wouldn’t be found dead in this place. I hail from uptown. Here, downtown, murder is widespread Someone is always getting killed: Prostitutes, druggies and the like Thinking about it gives me chills. Man! I wish I had my road bike I’d flee this jungle battlefield. For now, better keep my eyes peeled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/27/2010 7:30:00 AM
WHAT AN ERRIE FEELING. ALBERT, YOUR RHYMES ARE WELL DONE. DEEP AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:57:00 AM
impressive Albert, a strong image and thought. You gave me the chills, thinking of a bad place to be. Risking your life being broken down in the wrong side of town. The truth is this whole world is a broke downtown. One thing we can't escape id death and judgement. Enjoyed your poem. Awesome,..p.d.
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:50:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!
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