Brise/Brezza/Brisa/Breeze

I love the breeze in my hair

The cool zephyr everywhere

It comes through with a zing

Almost makes me want to sing

The wind takes so much care

not to blow away all my hair

Its so boring when it's gone

but i know i'll see it another dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/18/2016 10:17:00 AM
OLIVIA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 8/13/2008 5:45:00 AM
Olivia - very beautiful and sweet poem - Gret job - God Bless
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