Brisbane

Brisbane Rain squall just came from east of me, Came blowing from the big blue sea, 5 pm the windows shut, For I in Brisbane be. Brown snakes and lizards do hide, From the city dwellers, do slide, Green Frogs there used to be, Cane toads suck em down for free, Green Frogs don’t suicide. Fly screens keep the mossies out, Midges sand flies, catch you out, They come through to get you Clyde, There is no itch in doubt. The sun the sand the cooling breeze, Live on the beach, be at your ease, Hippies still enjoy the lifestyle, these, Things are of our nation… Brisbane at 5pm
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Brown Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Don. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 10:29 PM
Well written Don. Enjoyed the read. Congratulations
Treetop Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 3:29 AM
Ah mate I live here in Brissie town despite the ants and fleas, a city dweller I do be, in the town right next to thee! Hugs Lizzie
Horsman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 10:51 AM
Australia Fair, like this, Don, a beautiful city indeed. harry
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 8:15 AM
don,this piece is dressed to thrill!... fantastic read with my winning bet..:) huggs!
Williams Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 5:09 AM
snakes, sand flies, midges, frogs and lizards, and still you make it sound inviting, set up the tinnies mate am on my way..David
Maverick Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 1:07 AM
I 'reckon you'll do me ( mate ) there's clever and smart" and "there's a thing called "fate" ognord is 1 thing" i know you ain't..) and to ignore that just would not be "straight"
Johnson Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 1:57 AM
ognord 4 me duktonye, pluck em feathers, pages flee, finding yes Idiosyncrasy, 2 perplex, dummie me....correct.
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