Briny Curse

—The Affliction of Abundance— The ocean thirsteth, though her fathomless deeps contain Enough of water to drown kingdoms, yet cannot slake the thirst that salt, her ancient curse, doth breed again within the very flood no drought could ever take; for what should quench her is condemned to be the brine she bears—and therefore cannot drink the sea. The flame devoureth timber, drawing into its core the resin, sap, and heartwood of the forest as it feeds; yet every bough surrendered through its incandescent door leaves in the fire a hunger fiercer than its needs; till what should exhaust the appetite of flame becomes the very fuel whereby it renews its claim. The moon, dispensing argent through the sleeping land, doth pour her borrowed splendour over vale and stone, yet keeps within herself—where no terrestrial hand may reach—the lightless kingdom she must call her own; thus all the world receives the radiance she gives— yet what she cannot shine upon is where she lives. The wound, once closed, retains beneath the skin the iron's ancient memory, though flesh hath grown across the breach through which the violence entered in, and time, that boasts it healeth all, hath only shown how what the flesh seals over may yet remain— the proof that what was broken had the strength to live again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 24, 2026 at 3:36 AM
Mohit, this is a great masterpiece of poetry that really captivates with its vivid imagery and contemplative themes. The comparisons between natural elements and human emotions are both thought-provoking and beautifully executed. Your use of language paints a picture that feels both timeless and relatable. Your poem is even more engaging and enhanced accessibility through your creativity. It's a wonderfully crafted piece that resonates with depth and elegance. Keep writing!
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August 24, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Esteemed Sir Poet, 🌹 I receive your generous words with a gratitude deeper than I can readily utter. Your reading has not merely praised the poem, but discerned the inward architecture of its thought—the paradoxes, the allegorical correspondences, and the quiet tensions wherein the verse seeks its meaning. Such attentive generosity is a rare gift to any poet. I remain profoundly humbled that the work has found so discerning a reader in you, and sincerely grateful for the encouragement with which you have strengthened my resolve to keep seeking whatever truth may yet be wrought into language. Mine Salutation, Wrought in Reverence: - ✨❤️"Esteemed Sir Poet, thy words arrive not bare, nor hollow, but with oceanic grace profound, laden with benedictions vast as prayer, whose fathomless abundance doth me surround; and these I shall, within my bosom, shrine, where gratitude makes sacred what is thine." ❤️✨
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August 23, 2026 at 11:31 PM
Mohit, this is a masterful exploration of paradox and the "affliction of abundance." Your consistent ababcc rhyme scheme beautifully grounds the grand, allegorical elements, giving each stanza a satisfying, resolute finish with those concluding couplets. The imagery is rich and striking—particularly the ocean unable to drink its own brine, and the moon dispensing "borrowed splendour" while inhabiting a lightless kingdom. The elevated, archaic diction ("thirsteth," "argent," "healeth") perfectly supports the classical tone, weaving irony and symbolism into a profound meditation on endurance and nature's inherent contradictions. 👏 A truly captivating read!❤️
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August 24, 2026 at 3:57 AM
Cherished Alison, 🌸 I am sincerely grateful for so discerning and generous a reading. 🌹 You have not merely read my verses—you have entered their architecture, heard their paradoxes, and illuminated the intent beneath their imagery. Your thoughtful readings and constant encouragement are deeply motivating to me. Thank you for giving my work such attentive eyes and such a gracious heart. ❤️ Stay blest evermore, dear friend! ✨
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