Brilliance

Blowing in the wind
Rarely touching ground
Intend on sparkling
Lifting souls through clouds
Longing to embrace
Immortal life, found
Amazing in grace
Nesting in the Home
Claimed by one aim
Ever to breathe Love.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 04.29.11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fringe Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Quite a visual of an immortal soul. good write.
Foulk Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 2:07 PM
a very wonderful piece you wrote, so beautiful, really enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on He carried his sorrow to the grave.
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April 29, 2011 at 2:02 PM
I especially like the last two lines..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for the intuitive review of my work..Cody's dad has an untreatable illness that leads to death..He is in the next to last stage of Huntington's Disease..He probably weights 90 lbs. and has all the abnormal movements, has trouble swallowing, gets choked but has not had aspiration pneumonia yet..Sara
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April 29, 2011 at 1:12 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Caroline. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I hope the sun shines down upon you and brings joy into your heart. Love, Carol
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April 29, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Beautiful word to use for your acrostic, this is very uplifting Caroline :) thank you as well for dropping by my poem, I am glad that it made you laugh :) I love to laugh :) enjoy your day :D
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April 29, 2011 at 12:06 AM
sweet acrostic, Caroline. and "amazing in grace."
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April 28, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Our Lord's brilliance shines in this spiritual acrostic, Caroline. Even when times are tough, we always have a place to turn, "nesting" in the grace of His love. Very uplifting, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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