Brilliance

Challenging house lights on our street,
that sheer brilliance of outer space.
Brash stars shimmering in the heat,                                        
challenging house lights on our street.
Riding the Moon to the bedsheet,
wishes bounce on my pillowcase.
Challenging house lights on our street,
that sheer brilliance of outer space.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 1:14 PM
This is amazing work, love "riding with the moon" ! :)
Udaeta Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 1:52 PM
Thank you!! Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Love this, Melani! … Brash stars shimmering in the heat
Udaeta Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Thank you. Blessings.
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