Brightest of Tomorrow

I will handle this fervor so right till sunlit glances wake our day, and when the moon has tamed its flight new dawn's wind releases its sway beholding our future vows mid-air; this love from heaven drifts with flair endowing pleasure to declare, as we light up in a moonlit ray. This brightest tomorrow, I'll face for deep care is never selfish when zest of life the years embrace; forever is ours to relish! Future Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron 5/11/2016
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Salehi Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Congratulations on your win.
A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Nette, congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
Sathasivam Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Excellent. Well penned. All the best. Thanks for sharing it
Dalei Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 5:19 AM
Nette, Very nice concept & excellent lay out with beautiful imagery. Beginning & ending both are very nice...........//:) hugs
Davey Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 1:23 AM
Endearing write Nette, congrats on your fine placement in this contest
Chutani Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:59 AM
rhyming with future, Nette. Congrats, Mohan
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 8:51 AM
- I wish you a wonderful tomorrow, dear Nette - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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