Bright, Clear Picture

A city park after
a storm
    The leaves on 
the trees are drooping
     small puddles 
in the muddy field
     birds flying overhead
Empty now, the park 
    almost seems like a
      living organism
    Drip, drip,drip
as the water slides down 
    a statue
     The benches are wet 
but I decide to sit 
    on one 
 Breathing in air that 
has been cleansed by 
     the downpour
If I only felt this way all the time!
a squirrel rushes up 
   an oak tree
   life goes on 
as it always has
    Sometimes we 
need a heavy rain 
      to clear the air 
to feed the grass 
to make us feel 
     whole again 
The squirrel comes 
     down again
curious and hoping for 
       food
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Another awesome poem! You are truly special, Matt! It takes a special person to "see" all of this. Beautiful! Another fav.! Totally enjoyed this, too! Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Nature cleansed and mind refreshed left open for thoughts to flow and the pen to go swiftly across the page with the Spirit in control. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 11:51 AM
A very lovely slice of life picture, Matthew. I really enjoyed reading this. LUv, andrea
Brown Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesom poetry with us today Matthew. Love, Carol
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February 8, 2010 at 5:54 PM
i like this. wonderful write. i love that theory. did you come up with this while sitting in a park?
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